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    • WrCombsW
      WrCombs @Obsolesce
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      @Obsolesce said in Resume:

      @WrCombs said in Resume:

      @Kris_K said in Resume:

      Your resume should be tailored to that specific job. Can't tell much without seeing the ad and job description. Who knows what the position you're going to apply for is and if it's a good match for the skills and experience you list.
      You should begin with fixing typos first though..

      fixed the solutions typo.
      are there any other ones?

      personal labs isn't a proper noun, I wouldn't capitalize it unless you are referring to a product called "Personal Labs".

      fixed that.

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      • IRJI
        IRJ @WrCombs
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        @WrCombs said in Resume:

        I'm getting ready to apply to a new company with a much better position.

        Here is my resume prior to sending this out to them .

        a3502106-c773-4fd0-9019-d89c52f8e2cd-image.png
        could you read through it and tell me what you think before I send this in to the hiring manager?

        I dislike using the phrase "personal lab" on the resume. It's great to test things in a lab and talk about that during the interview, but on your resume you should just list it as experience. Then if they ask about it in interviews you can tell them how you did it in your lab.

        I also feel like it's scatter brained, and the order makes no sense. Put what you care to show off to your new job first on that list. If you put network devices as your first point, they are going to assume (rightly so) that it's your strongest topic. So you better know it inside and out.

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        • WrCombsW
          WrCombs
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          updated 398cbd83-2eaf-4448-bf52-1fe47c95fb6e-image.png

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          • IRJI
            IRJ @WrCombs
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            @WrCombs said in Resume:

            updated 398cbd83-2eaf-4448-bf52-1fe47c95fb6e-image.png

            Do you really want to highlight hardware installation as your main qualification?

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            • WrCombsW
              WrCombs @IRJ
              last edited by

              @IRJ said in Resume:

              @WrCombs said in Resume:

              updated 398cbd83-2eaf-4448-bf52-1fe47c95fb6e-image.png

              Do you really want to highlight hardware installation as your main qualification?

              why not?

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              • JaredBuschJ
                JaredBusch @WrCombs
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                @WrCombs said in Resume:

                @IRJ said in Resume:

                @WrCombs said in Resume:

                updated 398cbd83-2eaf-4448-bf52-1fe47c95fb6e-image.png

                Do you really want to highlight hardware installation as your main qualification?

                why not?

                It is zero IT.

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                • WrCombsW
                  WrCombs
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                  More like this? or

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                  • DustinB3403D
                    DustinB3403 @WrCombs
                    last edited by

                    @WrCombs just a nagging question by why doesn't your current employer have a redirect from http://rdspos.com to https://rdspos.com

                    Seems insane to leave the unsecured connection there.

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                    • DustinB3403D
                      DustinB3403
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                      Skills used I don't think is accurate. It might make more sense to say "Systems used" or "Operating Systems Supported"

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                      • DustinB3403D
                        DustinB3403
                        last edited by

                        Bullet points should never end in a period mark. Example below


                        Proficiency with operating systems listed below

                        • Windows Server 2016, 2012 (R2), 2008
                        • Windows 10, 8.1, 8 and 7
                        • Mac OSX High Sierra

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                        • DustinB3403D
                          DustinB3403
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                          Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

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                          • IRJI
                            IRJ @DustinB3403
                            last edited by

                            @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                            Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                            I disagree

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                            • IRJI
                              IRJ
                              last edited by

                              Bullets should be strong statements, not just list OS versions

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                              • DustinB3403D
                                DustinB3403 @IRJ
                                last edited by

                                @IRJ said in Resume:

                                @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                I disagree

                                Good for you, you've never seen a bullet point list. If you're writing complete sentences as bullet points you're doing something wrong.

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                                • ObsolesceO
                                  Obsolesce @DustinB3403
                                  last edited by

                                  @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                  @IRJ said in Resume:

                                  @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                  Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                  I disagree

                                  Good for you, you've never seen a bullet point list. If you're writing complete sentences as bullet points you're doing something wrong.

                                  Where is your evidence to back up your claim that bullet points should never be full sentences or longer sentence fragments and should never end with a period? I have found lots that say otherwise, however.

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                                  • DustinB3403D
                                    DustinB3403 @Obsolesce
                                    last edited by

                                    @Obsolesce said in Resume:

                                    @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                    @IRJ said in Resume:

                                    @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                    Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                    I disagree

                                    Good for you, you've never seen a bullet point list. If you're writing complete sentences as bullet points you're doing something wrong.

                                    Where is your evidence to back up your claim that bullet points should never be full sentences or longer sentence fragments and should never end with a period? I have found lots that say otherwise, however.

                                    Show me the proof you have that bulleted listed should exclusively be sentences.

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                                    • ObsolesceO
                                      Obsolesce @DustinB3403
                                      last edited by

                                      @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                      @Obsolesce said in Resume:

                                      @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                      @IRJ said in Resume:

                                      @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                      Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                      I disagree

                                      Good for you, you've never seen a bullet point list. If you're writing complete sentences as bullet points you're doing something wrong.

                                      Where is your evidence to back up your claim that bullet points should never be full sentences or longer sentence fragments and should never end with a period? I have found lots that say otherwise, however.

                                      Show me the proof you have that bulleted listed should exclusively be sentences.

                                      Show me the proof you have to back up your claim that bullet points should only be one word

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                                      • stacksofplatesS
                                        stacksofplates @IRJ
                                        last edited by

                                        @IRJ said in Resume:

                                        @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                        Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                        I disagree

                                        Yes I also disagree.

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                                        • DustinB3403D
                                          DustinB3403 @Obsolesce
                                          last edited by

                                          @Obsolesce said in Resume:

                                          @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                          @Obsolesce said in Resume:

                                          @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                          @IRJ said in Resume:

                                          @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                          Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                          I disagree

                                          Good for you, you've never seen a bullet point list. If you're writing complete sentences as bullet points you're doing something wrong.

                                          Where is your evidence to back up your claim that bullet points should never be full sentences or longer sentence fragments and should never end with a period? I have found lots that say otherwise, however.

                                          Show me the proof you have that bulleted listed should exclusively be sentences.

                                          Show me the proof you have to back up your claim that bullet points should only be one word

                                          I never said ONE Word, I said concise. Learn to read dipshit.

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                                          • ObsolesceO
                                            Obsolesce @DustinB3403
                                            last edited by

                                            @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                            @Obsolesce said in Resume:

                                            @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                            @Obsolesce said in Resume:

                                            @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                            @IRJ said in Resume:

                                            @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                            Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                            I disagree

                                            Good for you, you've never seen a bullet point list. If you're writing complete sentences as bullet points you're doing something wrong.

                                            Where is your evidence to back up your claim that bullet points should never be full sentences or longer sentence fragments and should never end with a period? I have found lots that say otherwise, however.

                                            Show me the proof you have that bulleted listed should exclusively be sentences.

                                            Show me the proof you have to back up your claim that bullet points should only be one word

                                            I never said ONE Word, I said concise. Learn to read dipshit.

                                            Exactly my point. So stop with that bullshit. I will not fall into your fallacy trap.

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