@IRJ said in Resume critique:

Bad resume skills look like this:

Customer Service Oriented Microsoft Windows XP, 7, 8.1, 10 System and Network Troubleshooting Network Configuration Red Hat Linux, Ubuntu, and Fedora Active Directory Server Migrations VPN Cisco Switches

Good Resume Skills would look like this:

Proficient in Active Directory - Experienced with AD upgrades, migrations, client deployments and domain trusts Strong in Linux Administration - Deployments, upgrades, scripting, and management of all common distributions (RHEL , Fedora, Ubuntu, and others) Secure Network Implementation - Managed deployments and configuration for routers , switches, VPN devices, all types of firewalls, and more. (Cisco, Palo Alto, Juniper)

I love this format. Going to apply it to my soon-to-be-updated resume. Thanks.