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    • FredtxF
      Fredtx
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      @scottalanmiller
      How about the responsibilities? Do you see anything I should modify/change?

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      • scottalanmillerS
        scottalanmiller
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        Way too much detail here...

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        Education should be distilled down quite a lot. For example, if you attend several colleges and do a lot of study, you'd only list one or two of them, not the lot. You would never list a single class, but since you have no degree from it, you need a line item to put there, so that is fine. But three bullet points of details from a class is way too much. Remove those. Especially as much of it is listing that the class was teaching bench and consumer tech rather than IT. All three bullet points detract rather than enhancing. Remove those completely, put the A+ down there and then focus on the parts above. That leaves more space to highlight the skills with its own section up top.

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        • scottalanmillerS
          scottalanmiller
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          Skills is current a series of lists and single items, I'm not sure of the meaningfulness of the commas and periods within that section. Maybe break that out into a double wide bulleted list or something. Make those big items easier to read and find.

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          • FredtxF
            Fredtx @scottalanmiller
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            @scottalanmiller said in Resume Help:

            Skills is current a series of lists and single items, I'm not sure of the meaningfulness of the commas and periods within that section. Maybe break that out into a double wide bulleted list or something. Make those big items easier to read and find.

            Something like this?

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            • scottalanmillerS
              scottalanmiller @Fredtx
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              @fredtx said in Resume Help:

              @scottalanmiller said in Resume Help:

              Skills is current a series of lists and single items, I'm not sure of the meaningfulness of the commas and periods within that section. Maybe break that out into a double wide bulleted list or something. Make those big items easier to read and find.

              Something like this?

              0_1518305421801_0a0d1087-d840-40db-bba7-ac56497d63c1-image.png

              Yes, much better. Maybe two columns wide?

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              • FredtxF
                Fredtx
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                Better?

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                • scottalanmillerS
                  scottalanmiller
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                  Yes, that is much better, I think.

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                  • scottalanmillerS
                    scottalanmiller
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                    Citrix what? Citrix makes a lot of different products. XenApp, XenDesktop, XenServer, and so forth. Just Citrix doesn't tell us anything.

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                      • FredtxF
                        Fredtx
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                        updated.

                        https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OmIwV1c2_Lr9N_EUxUe_YEpVrhfaF0V_/view?usp=sharing

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