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    • CloudKnightC
      CloudKnight @RojoLoco
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      @rojoloco said in Leaflet Review:

      Why is "16 years' experience" written as a possessive? No apostrophe needed there.

      Comma after "350+ staff", that's a compound sentence.

      Thank you Rojoloco, getting this changed.

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      • RojoLocoR
        RojoLoco @CloudKnight
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        @stuartjordan said in Leaflet Review:

        @rojoloco said in Leaflet Review:

        Why is "16 years' experience" written as a possessive? No apostrophe needed there.

        Comma after "350+ staff", that's a compound sentence.

        Thank you Rojoloco, getting this changed.

        I promise I'm not trying to be a dick, but I'll gladly correct your grammar and punctuation.

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        • JaredBuschJ
          JaredBusch @RojoLoco
          last edited by

          @rojoloco said in Leaflet Review:

          @stuartjordan said in Leaflet Review:

          @rojoloco said in Leaflet Review:

          Why is "16 years' experience" written as a possessive? No apostrophe needed there.

          Comma after "350+ staff", that's a compound sentence.

          Thank you Rojoloco, getting this changed.

          I promise I'm not trying to be a dick, but I'll gladly correct your grammar and punctuation.

          It is what he asked for so it is all a good thing.. FFS you don't want me doing it..

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          • CloudKnightC
            CloudKnight @RojoLoco
            last edited by

            @rojoloco - No problem, I appreciate the feedback, this is important, I want it to be correct.

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            • CloudKnightC
              CloudKnight @JaredBusch
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              @jaredbusch Any Feedback Jared, I know you are a honest critique lol.

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              • JaredBuschJ
                JaredBusch @CloudKnight
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                @stuartjordan said in Leaflet Review:

                @jaredbusch Any Feedback Jared, I know you are a honest critique lol.

                content I'm not seeing problems with.. but yeha.. do not ask me to spot grammar and shit.. nope...

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                • scottalanmillerS
                  scottalanmiller @RojoLoco
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                  @rojoloco said in Leaflet Review:

                  Why is "16 years' experience" written as a possessive? No apostrophe needed there.

                  It works either way in this case. This is a weird one. It can be "16 years (plural) of experience" or "the experience belonging to 16 years". Both are legitimate ways to interpret the stated phrase, one would be written with the apostrophe and one without. I agree that without is better, but technically with is just fine. Without it, there is an implied "of", with it, it is correct as is.

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                  • scottalanmillerS
                    scottalanmiller
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                    "Within the Essex County." A very pretentious county indeed. I'm guessing the word "area" used to follow there and was removed and the sentence was not updated.

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                    • scottalanmillerS
                      scottalanmiller
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                      "Excess of 350+".

                      That's redundant. "Excess of 350" or "350+".

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                      • RojoLocoR
                        RojoLoco @scottalanmiller
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                        @scottalanmiller said in Leaflet Review:

                        "Within the Essex County." A very pretentious county indeed. I'm guessing the word "area" used to follow there and was removed and the sentence was not updated.

                        I skipped over that one on purpose.

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                        • CloudKnightC
                          CloudKnight @scottalanmiller
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                          @scottalanmiller Thanks Scott, should I take the "+" out of 350?

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                          • CloudKnightC
                            CloudKnight @scottalanmiller
                            last edited by

                            @scottalanmiller said in Leaflet Review:

                            "Within the Essex County." A very pretentious county indeed. I'm guessing the word "area" used to follow there and was removed and the sentence was not updated.

                            Do you think this should be "located in the Essex County" rather then "Within"?

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                            • scottalanmillerS
                              scottalanmiller @CloudKnight
                              last edited by

                              @stuartjordan said in Leaflet Review:

                              @scottalanmiller said in Leaflet Review:

                              "Within the Essex County." A very pretentious county indeed. I'm guessing the word "area" used to follow there and was removed and the sentence was not updated.

                              Do you think this should be "located in the Essex County" rather then "Within"?

                              It's the "the" that is the issue.

                              Is it "Within Essex County" or is it "Withing the Essex County area"? The "the" only makes sense if the "area" or "region" is tacked on at the end.

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                              • CloudKnightC
                                CloudKnight
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                                Thanks @JaredBusch -

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                                • CloudKnightC
                                  CloudKnight @scottalanmiller
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                                  @scottalanmiller County is like the u.s equivalent to state I believe. So it would be like, "Located Within the Texas State" - that's what I'm trying to mean.

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                                  • RojoLocoR
                                    RojoLoco @CloudKnight
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                                    @stuartjordan said in Leaflet Review:

                                    @scottalanmiller County is like the u.s equivalent to state I believe. So it would be like, "Located Within the Texas State" - that's what I'm trying to mean.

                                    Nobody here would ever say "located within the texas state". Drop that "the". It would be "located within the state of texas".

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                                    • CloudKnightC
                                      CloudKnight
                                      last edited by

                                      Much Appreciated everyone, always good to get opinions and comments.
                                      I'm quite happy with the design though, looks modern and fresh.

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                                      • thwrT
                                        thwr
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                                        I don't know how ads work where you are, but I would keep it way simpler. It looks like a ... how to say, it's like a chef brought you everything he found in his kitchen which might be somehow eatable, no matter what.

                                        As for me, I wouldn't call a (small) company which offers phenomenal webdesign and (qualified) network security audits at the same time. I'm sure you're doing a really good job, but what is the core of your business? What are the top - let's say five - things people know your company for? Probably not webdesign 😉

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                                        • CloudKnightC
                                          CloudKnight @thwr
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                                          @thwr Points taken on board, thanks thwr 🙂

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