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    • scottalanmillerS
      scottalanmiller
      last edited by scottalanmiller

      Don't abbreviate senior as Sr. And don't capitalize the general noun "senior engineer", leave it in the lower case.

      Plural of IT Pro is IT Pros, no apostrophe.

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      • Bill KindleB
        Bill Kindle @scottalanmiller
        last edited by

        @scottalanmiller Thanks for pointing those out, corrected now.

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        • Bill KindleB
          Bill Kindle @Bill Kindle
          last edited by

          As far as the flow is concerned, does it make for an easy read? Is it easy to follow, easy to understand?

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          • C
            Carnival Boy
            last edited by Carnival Boy

            Just playing devil's advocate here and criticizing the article, but isn't it a bit obvious? Does anyone not know that good project planning and lots of testing is a good thing?

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            • Bill KindleB
              Bill Kindle @Carnival Boy
              last edited by

              @Carnival-Boy said:

              Just playing devil's advocate here and criticizing the article, but isn't it a bit obvious? Does anyone not know that good project planning and lots of testing is a good thing?

              I was thinking that myself, but at the same time the obvious sometimes alludes us. The intended audience isn't really meant for those of us who understand that it's obvious, but at the same time trying to relate past experience to someone who might just be starting out in IT. If that makes sense......

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              • C
                Carnival Boy
                last edited by

                Fair enough. In my head, your 7Ps is spoken by Pippi from the film Mr Popper's Penguins.

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                • Bill KindleB
                  Bill Kindle @Carnival Boy
                  last edited by

                  @Carnival-Boy said:

                  Fair enough. In my head, your 7Ps is spoken by Pippi from the film Mr Popper's Penguins.

                  Women with British accents command attention 🙂

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                  • JaredBuschJ
                    JaredBusch @Bill Kindle
                    last edited by

                    @Bill-Kindle said:

                    Women with British accents command attention 🙂

                    What about a Scottish woman using a British accent in an American commercial?

                    Youtube Video

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                    • Bill KindleB
                      Bill Kindle @JaredBusch
                      last edited by

                      @JaredBusch Even better. They are my people.

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                      • scottalanmillerS
                        scottalanmiller @Carnival Boy
                        last edited by

                        @Carnival-Boy said:

                        Just playing devil's advocate here and criticizing the article, but isn't it a bit obvious? Does anyone not know that good project planning and lots of testing is a good thing?

                        Never been on SW then? 😉

                        No matter how obvious something seems, most people are not aware.

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                        • thanksajdotcomT
                          thanksajdotcom @JaredBusch
                          last edited by

                          @JaredBusch said:

                          @Bill-Kindle said:

                          Women with British accents command attention 🙂

                          What about a Scottish woman using a British accent in an American commercial?

                          Youtube Video

                          That's too funny!

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                          • Bill KindleB
                            Bill Kindle @scottalanmiller
                            last edited by

                            @scottalanmiller said:

                            @Carnival-Boy said:

                            Just playing devil's advocate here and criticizing the article, but isn't it a bit obvious? Does anyone not know that good project planning and lots of testing is a good thing?

                            Never been on SW then? 😉

                            No matter how obvious something seems, most people are not aware.

                            Truer words cannot be spoken.

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                            • thanksajdotcomT
                              thanksajdotcom @Bill Kindle
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                              @Bill-Kindle said:

                              @scottalanmiller said:

                              @Carnival-Boy said:

                              Just playing devil's advocate here and criticizing the article, but isn't it a bit obvious? Does anyone not know that good project planning and lots of testing is a good thing?

                              Never been on SW then? 😉

                              No matter how obvious something seems, most people are not aware.

                              Truer words cannot be spoken.

                              Amen.

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                              • scottalanmillerS
                                scottalanmiller
                                last edited by

                                Where is this article destined to be posted?

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                                • scottalanmillerS
                                  scottalanmiller
                                  last edited by

                                  In articles that I have written I often get one person responding to me thanking me because they learned something and another contacting me because he is offended that I was so condescending or pointing out something overly obvious.

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                                  • thanksajdotcomT
                                    thanksajdotcom @scottalanmiller
                                    last edited by

                                    @scottalanmiller said:

                                    In articles that I have written I often get one person responding to me thanking me because they learned something and another contacting me because he is offended that I was so condescending or pointing out something overly obvious.

                                    Yup. I've seen that as well.

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                                    • Bill KindleB
                                      Bill Kindle @scottalanmiller
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                                      @scottalanmiller it's destined to one or two places. Spotlight on IT, my personal blog or both.

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                                      • Bill KindleB
                                        Bill Kindle @scottalanmiller
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                                        @scottalanmiller that's why I don't allow unsolicited comments on my blog 🙂

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